| Author | Message | ||
| Johan_gunardi (Johan_gunardi)
New member Username: Johan_gunardi Post Number: 37 Registered: 5-2007 |
Venny is sleeping. Suddenly the bell ring and a stranger come to her room. Then Venny go outside. | ||
| Judgedeadd (Judgedeadd)
New member Username: Judgedeadd Post Number: 742 Registered: 9-2006 |
Venny: h a m? stranger: h a m? Bell: doorbell? Did Venny go outside because of the stranger's entrance? Was Venny scared? Is this happening indoors? If yes, then: in a house? public building? | ||
| Johan_gunardi (Johan_gunardi)
New member Username: Johan_gunardi Post Number: 38 Registered: 5-2007 |
Venny: h yes a no m? no stranger: h a m? yes Bell: doorbell? no Did Venny go outside because of the stranger's entrance? yope Was Venny scared? yes Is this happening indoors? yes If yes, then: in a house? no public building? yes | ||
| Judgedeadd (Judgedeadd)
New member Username: Judgedeadd Post Number: 744 Registered: 9-2006 |
Venny: female? teenager? child? Is this happening inside a shop? library? musuem? school? Would someoe else be scared of the stranger? Did Venny meet the stranger before? Did Venny mistake the stranger for someone else? | ||
| Tsoram1970 (Tsoram1970)
New member Username: Tsoram1970 Post Number: 513 Registered: 6-2001 |
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| Johan_gunardi (Johan_gunardi)
New member Username: Johan_gunardi Post Number: 40 Registered: 5-2007 |
Venny: female? irr teenager? maybe child? maybe Is this happening inside a shop? library? musuem? school? this Would someoe else be scared of the stranger? yesDid Venny meet the stranger before? maybe Did Venny mistake the stranger for someone else? please rephrase. Tsoram, it is wrong. | ||
| Judgedeadd (Judgedeadd)
New member Username: Judgedeadd Post Number: 748 Registered: 9-2006 |
Did Venny mistake the stranger for someone else? I don't really understand what needs rephrasing here... Did the stranger look intimidating? did he have a weapon? Was he really dangerous? | ||
| Enjay (Enjay)
New member Username: Enjay Post Number: 548 Registered: 4-2007 |
Did Venny see the stranger, but think that it was somebody else? | ||
| Johan_gunardi (Johan_gunardi)
New member Username: Johan_gunardi Post Number: 43 Registered: 5-2007 |
Did Venny mistake the stranger for someone else? no Did the stranger look intimidating? no did he have a weapon? no Was he really dangerous? no Did Venny see the stranger, but think that it was somebody else? no | ||
| Eli (Eli)
New member Username: Eli Post Number: 559 Registered: 11-2003 |
Is it relevant why Venny is sleeping at school? Is she in class when this happens? The bell, is it the school bell? | ||
| Enjay (Enjay)
New member Username: Enjay Post Number: 551 Registered: 4-2007 |
Does the bell wake her up? Does Venny get in trouble for sleeping during class? | ||
| Johan_gunardi (Johan_gunardi)
New member Username: Johan_gunardi Post Number: 45 Registered: 5-2007 |
Is it relevant why Venny is sleeping at school? no Is she in class when this happens? yes The bell, is it the school bell? yes Does the bell wake her up? no Does Venny get in trouble for sleeping during class? yes | ||
| Johan_gunardi (Johan_gunardi)
New member Username: Johan_gunardi Post Number: 46 Registered: 5-2007 |
Maybe you all have already know the answer ************SPOILER**************** Venny is sleeping during the lesson. The school bell ring, and the teacher come. The teacher doesn't want Venny to sleep, so he punish Venny. And then Venny go outside. |
