by irishelk » Thu Aug 06, 2020 6:57 pm
Doriana
Miles = H/A/M?
Vanessa = H/A/F? Yes x6.
Does Miles walk the path as part of his job? Yes. On the way to his job? Yesish. from his job? Possibly, irr. Is he running errands? Exercising? Walking for leisure? No to rest.
Is Vanessa walking with him? No. Does she usually walk with him? Or does she merely see him walk? This. Is she laughing because she thinks he’s being unreasonable? No.
Is there an actual danger present? Yesish, DOYD of danger. If so, in the form of a human being? Yesish. An animal? An object? Something more abstract? I wouldn't say abstract, but maybe not concrete?
Weather relevant? No. Precise time of day relevant? Might help. Is it dark? Yes.
markobr
"Miles" - that's just his name, he could as well be named Richard? Or is the unit of measure called "mile" relevant in any way? No, but good thought..
Path: Really a path in the sense that it's too small to be used by (most) cars? Yes. Could Miles cycle the path if he wanted to? Legally? Yes, but unlikely that he would. Could he drive a car there? Probably not, or it would be difficult. Legally? It probably wouldn't be illegal.
Does Miles carry something he doesn't usually carry when walking the path? Wear something? Not carry/wear something he usually does? No to all.
Season of year relevant? Holidays? Yes! Is he in a condition he usually isn't when walking the path? No. Maybe drunk? Sick?
AlbatrossLover
Is Vanessa's presence the reason Miles is nervous? No. Something she did? No. If so, intentionally? Is she playing a prank on him? She isn't...
Balin
Is Vanessa present during Miles' walk? (Throughout? At some point?)
Yes, throughout. Is she normally present? No.
trebor
Is Miles Vanessa’s pet, out for a walk with her? No. A dog?
Is Vanessa’s laughter out of maliciousness? It could be called that, maybe mild maliciousness. Has Miles ingested a substance that has altered his reality? Has Vanessa? No.
Is Miles usually nervous when he walks this path? No.